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Believe me, there is an entire poem here.
You just can't see it.
Heck, I can't even see it to be honest with you.
Why?
Well because chances are I don't even know what to say,
Or I'm just choosing not to say anything.
Why?
Well because chances are that some one will just come along and contradict me,
Saying that I don't know what I'm saying---as usual.

Whatever.
I don't really care.
After all, I really AM just a childish, immature boy.
Who doesn't think before they speak.

That being said,
Do you see the words that are here?
What's there to say? Nothing here apparently.
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:icongotterdam16:
Gotterdam16 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student General Artist
this is one brilliant way to explain what goes in many people's heads most of the day
namely mine
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DevilKid-chan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't see the words, I see a teddybear with a machine gun constellation....
....But in spite of my messed-up psyche, this is a cool thing to do. :)
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Heystopstaring Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
...S'cuse me, I gotta ponder this for a while.
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Writer
What an original idea, I love it. :D You're right; sometimes there really isn't anything to say, or at least nothing that can be said with words.
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vallyfullofemotions Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very well written! ^.^ good job! I like the flow and style! :D
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natirey7 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student Writer
very different. amazing.
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Milkfist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student Photographer
:clap:
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animazingme Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student Writer
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unique! :D
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joel55555 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is rather new! I like it.
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DimefortheDevil Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Really really nice! It's so creative, I had to read it twice. I love the variety of punctuation in the first part. :)
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